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Irene and the End of a Dream
by Don Drewniak

It was a warm mid-April day. A perfect day to play pick-up baseball.

A quarter-mile south of the Fall River, Massachusetts tenement in which I lived with my parents was King Philip Field. It had been created decades earlier as a recreational area for workers and family members of the nearby King Philip Cotton Mills. The mills, like most in the city, were out of business. The field was only marginally maintained, but included three areas where baseball could be played.

I raced home from school, changed into ratty clothes, grabbed my bat and glove, and headed out the door. As I stepped onto the sidewalk, I was intercepted by a girl, Irene, who had transferred two days earlier into my fifth-grade class at the Slade School.

“Hi, what good luck. I'm in your class and I live right across the street. Where are you going to play ball?” she asked.

“The ball field.”

“Wait for me.”

“No girls play there.”

“Wanna bet?”

With that, she dashed into the house.

Now what do I do?

I didn’t want to take off without her, but I also didn’t want to be seen coming to the field with a girl. That would have been a big no-no. Just before she returned with her bat and glove, I formulated what I thought to be a foolproof plan.

As soon as she stepped onto the sidewalk, I yelled, “Let’s go!” and took off at full speed, figuring I would arrive at the field well before her. Halfway there, she pulled even with me and slowed to my pace.

We arrived together. Most of the regulars were there and greeted me with comments such as, “Who’s your girlfriend?”

The two captains were sixth-graders and were the same ones who always picked the teams. Once they were ready, the rest of us, including Irene, lined up.

“Girls can’t play,” said one of the captains. His name was Robert, but most of the kids called him Big Z because he was one of the biggest sixth-graders in the area and his last name began with Z.

“Who says?” responded Irene.

“You’ll get hurt.”

This caused most of the boys to start laughing.

The laughing stopped and all became quiet when Irene said, “You’re just afraid that I’ll make you look bad.”

“Are you nuts or something?”

“Scared?” she challenged.

“Of you? You are nuts.”

“Let me pitch five balls to you. If you can hit just one of them fair, I’ll leave. If you can’t, I play.”

Z paused as his brain must have been working overtime. “Five swings, right? Strikes, right?”

“Right.”

“From the mound, right?”

“Right. I’ll need a few warm ups.”

“Don’t hurt your arm.”

That once again brought out the laughter.

The other captain volunteered to catch as Irene headed for the mound. I found myself rooting for her and was disappointed when she threw her first warm up with a stereotypical pitch-like-a-girl motion and the ball bounced four or five feet in front of the plate. More laughter erupted. She threw four more pitches. Three fell short of the plate and one bounced off it.

Z put his hands up in the air with palms facing out, signaling for quiet. “You can move in ten feet,” he snickered.

“Thank you, no.”

I had no idea what a premonition was back then, but an image of Casey at the Bat entered my thoughts as Z pounded the plate three times with the head of his bat and yelled out, “Don’t worry, I won’t hit you.”

Again laughter.

“I know,” said Irene.

As she wound up and fired her first pitch, gone was the pitch-like-a-girl motion. In its place was the softball windmill windup. The ball blazed over the middle of the plate. Z’s bat never moved.

“Strike,” bellowed the catcher.

Z was obviously stunned, as were all of us. Sounding pretty weak, he said, “It doesn’t count unless I swing.”

“They are all going to be strikes,” countered Irene.

Every kid sensed that Z was rattled — rattled big-time.

The next pitch was just as fast and just above the knees. Z never had a chance as he swung and missed like Mighty Casey. What had been laughter, was now cheering. Four more pitches, each was in a different location over the plate. More cheering as Z never came close to hitting any of them.

The game: Z won the toss, but angry and not thinking clearly, he didn’t pick Irene. The other captain grabbed her with the first pick. I knew I wouldn’t get picked until late in the “draft” and hoped I’d be on her team as I didn’t want to have to bat against her. I ended up on Z’s team.

Rats.

As I guessed might happen, Irene started as the pitcher. I wasn’t too surprised when she pitched slower than she did to Z before the game. She only pitched faster with runners on base and when she pitched to Z. She struck him out twice before a new pitcher replaced her to start the fourth. In my one at bat against her, I swung nice and easy, popping out to second base.

Not only could Irene pitch, she could field and hit. She didn’t hit the ball hard or far, but was sort of like Richie Ashburn who hit only 29 home runs in 15 MLB seasons, but had a .308 lifetime batting average.

She only played twice more and then was gone as her family moved away less than a month after arriving.

What I came to realize after watching her play was that I would never become a major league player, or even a Class D minor leaguer. I simply didn’t have the talent and no amount of practice would change that.