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All about Eve
by Jilliana Ranicar-Breese

I once had a friend called Eve. She was born in Germany but educated in Cardiff. She claimed that her father owned the factory of the yellow lead pencils Staedtler.

I first met Eve on my stand at the flea market in Portobello Road London in the mid 80’s.

Eve’s English was perfect and so was her accent. You could say she had a presence and was noticable with heavy makeup and panstick on her face but she had charisma and we clicked.

She came several times to my house. She seemed a generous woman but mysterious when I asked her about her life in Nuremberg. At that time she was teaching
English to diplomats from black Africa. Once she said she was Jewish although I never believed her.

I was invited to her home at the beginning of Advent which she shared with her mother in Nuremberg.

Over the coming years Eve and I kept in touch. She had never married but had a partner who was a doctor with an autistic creative daughter who she loved and cared for.

Then she vanished for several years. We didn’t have the internet and smartphones then and she was not on social media. She was deliberately impossible to trace.

Years past and one day she phoned out of the blue. She was living in America as a resident having emigrated and had built and designed a house in Cape Coral, West Florida on land which she had bought. She knew about Florida real estate prices and only seemed to mix socially with millionaires. She had become very materialistic and hard. She had not, however, forgotten me, her best girlfriend in the UK and was interested in my fashion sense as she also designed her exclusive clothing with her own label.

Eve had a dream to travel to Charleston cross country in her red mustang and stay in traditional bed and breakfast houses only with me.

Eve met me, looking slightly older, wearing, so I thought, paste jewellery but some time later at her home when she showed me her precious jewellery, she confessed they were real.

One time she let slip that she had had two years in a wheelchair. Piecing the chapters of her life together, I gathered she was living in Israel when some accident happened but she wouldn’t say any more.

Our trip went well. After, when I got back to London, she would call me every Sunday to tell me about her exciting life.

Then disaster struck. A hurricane hit her area and her house was right in the path. The property market in Florida crashed. Everyone was panicking and leaving the country. Eve was selling off all her valuable African objects at rock bottom prices until she only had her statement jewels. She finally managed to sell the empty wreck of her lovely home to a speculator developer and got onto the last flight out of West Florida.

I never heard from Eve again and do not know her fate.

Written 7/9/24 in Nightingale House, London.