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Pickup at Solferino Bellechasse, Paris
by Jilliana Ranicar-Breese

Have you ever met someone of interest without talking? I have in the 70’s. It was in Paris on a crowded bus going to St Germain. I was standing up as there were no available seats. So I was hanging on to the overhead hanger facing a good looking man who was also standing hanging on. We were in each other’s personal space. Our eyes locked but we did not say a word.

We reached our destination and he was getting off the. Straight away he asked me if I would like a drink at ‘The deux magots’ as it was cocktail hour. I told him I was working at the OECD at La Muette. He nodded but did not say what he did. In those days I didn’t ‘interview’ attractive men.

He suggested dinner at the nearby Laperouse. I agreed as I needed to eat. I was not used to fine dining more like eateries on the Boul’Miche. His company was pleasant and he was attractive so I agreed he could come back to my flat and spend the night with me. His name was Michel and I reckon he was 45-50 years old but I never asked.

A week later he phoned and asked me to spend the weekend with him on his favourite island - Guernsey! We would fly there and go to his regular hotel and eat lobster and…

Things went wrong from the beginning. I had brought a small hand soap with me and a larger soap. Without thinking I left the small soap on top of the larger soap. He went berserk and shouted I was an ignorant girl and that you don’t mix scents. While he was taking a shower I looked in his passport and saw he was the director of a perfume company which explained his outburst. Worse was to come the next day.

We went by boat to Sark for lunch. He knew the island well. It was known for not having cars and for its WW2 history. The restaurant specialised in lobster and was atop a hill with stunning views. Then he began to criticise my table manners which began with the posh cutlery. I burst into tears. I couldn’t eat what he had ordered for me. I choked on my unwanted food which made him more irritated. He’s said he wished he had not brought me away. I couldn’t stop crying.

The next morning he wanted to walk along the beach and I couldn’t keep up with him so I went back to the hotel determined to walk out after I had said Adieu.

He came back and immediately went to bed putting out the lights without speaking to me. I had moved my small bag into the seating area of the room and went to the reception to see about a train to Paris. It turned out he had only booked one way!