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Splendour of the setting sun
by Jilliana Ranicar-Breese

I never thought of retirement and getting old. It just happened one day without warning. It crept up on me when I didn’t expect it.

I was spending a few winter months in Chaniá, Crete where I was part of the Friday evening Jewish community. The service in the synagogue was very familiar as the sounds took me back to my teenage years in Liverpool where I grew up.

One morning I visited the synagogue and stepping outside the entrance, my leg gave way and collapsed. I fell on my back looking up at the blue blue sky lost in religious wonderland. People must have thought I’d had a heart attack but no, I was brought to my feet by Nikos Stavroulakis, the leader of the community, who took me to my temporary home around the corner and put me to bed.

After various phone calls a Turkish Iranian masseur came round and manipulated my body and legs with a special technique until the shooting pain disappeared.

That time I was saved but the next time, at Greek Easter, I wasn’t so lucky. I had collapsed for the second time but this time I had a Russian lady masseuse for a short while. It was then I decided to go home to Brighton. I had a sciatic nerve pressing on my spine and had to have immediate surgery.
I had difficulty walking and felt I had aged twenty years.

I had always looked and dressed twenty years younger than I was. My ‘Sultana’ style began in Crete where I bought bright flowing Indian cotton dresses and eventually led to life in Turkey wearing my signature turbans. Later in Rhodes, on another journey, I would add fresh colourful flowers in my hair.

My style was like painting in colours that made me look and feel younger by twenty years with my advancing years into the sunset.

Written in Nightingale 20/11/24.